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"In an era of storm and chaos, One will be born who will command the Power, but the ancient magic that flows in his veins like blood is his curse as well as his gift. In this time of cataclysm and ordeal, the upstart Empire of Vayal has placed a bounty on the heads of all scions of the lineage of Diomedas, for the oracle foretold the doom of Vayal, and it rides on the shoulders of the One. He lives and breathes already, hiding the old city of Zeheft and in the slowly drowning outlands. He is Faunos, still dangerously young -- and he has one dread: the witchfinders of Vayal, who are charged with the hunting of those like himself. Twenty years, Faunos has hidden and learned,until the gods of sea, storm and earth take Zeheft; and one night destiny brings Vayal's young witchfinder to the camps of the water gypsies, where Faunos should not have been. The Empire of the Atlantan has one slender chance to survive, and its struggle will begin on this night."




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Afterword

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Here ends the first book of The Fall of the Atlantean Empire! I've had a lot of fun writing this novel -- and I've learned a lot, which I'm about to share with you. There are two more novels to finish out the whole project, and readers who're enjoying this will be asking, where are they, when will they be available?

To answer this, we have to go right back to the beginning of what was, and is, an experiment!

I set up Legends fully "monetized," to see if readers would be supportive enough of this novel for it to earn some decent funds through the medium of advertising. There's a $1 PayPal donation button; there's Google ads that could be clicked by a reader who spied something interesting; there's links through to Amazon.com for any kind of shopping you can imagine, including your groceries. There's software that's been thoroughly test-driven by either myself or my associates at DreamCraft. And there are Amazon buttons where readers could actually invest in a book!

In other ways, loads of ways for readers to support Legends, making it financially feasible for Keegan to keep up with it, as a free online gay novel.

So, to what extent are readers supporting this?

Well, it's been two months since the first segments went up, and I can tell you, in eight weeks we've had about 8,000 page loads -- about 60 regular readers, in countries as diverse as the US, UK, Aus, NZ, Japan, Poland, Norway, China, Russia, Canada, Germany, Brazil ... and lots more. We get visitors sent to us by my own blogs and sites, plus those of Aricia Gavriel, plus Live Journal, and WebFictionGuide, Aarin Fantasy, and Online Novels. (In the months to come, I'll be working to expand the number of places that link to Legends; but to come this far in eight weeks is pretty darned good.)

But have readers supported the concept of "free fiction that pays for itself via the advertising?"

Yes and no. If I were waiting for clicks on the $1 PayPal donation button, I'd have been rather perturbed. We had 7 such clicks, three of which came from the same person, who understood perfectly how this was supposed to work ... and I'm very grateful for this. Thank you muchly -- you know who you are! We had around 100 clicks on Google Ads, of which Ma Goog allowed only about 50% to go through as "valid clicks," and these paid anywhere from .01c each to 35c each, raising about $25 total, over the eight weeks. Half a dozen people went shopping at Amazon, starting from the Legends page, with purchases providing about another $12.

And four Mel Keegan paperbacks were purchased from Amazon, directly from the Legends page, which is obviously where the author makes the most handsome sum. Thanks, guys ... this was great.

So, incomes via the advertising parked on Legends is a bit thin on the ground, but --

I can also tell you that in the two months since the novel started going up serially, there's been an astonishing "uptick" in sales across the board. Everything has been selling regularly, and well, at Payloadz and Kindle, at Amazon and Lulu. So it would be absolutely true to say that Legends has worked wonders for Keegan's overall bread-and-butter.

Not only this, but so far, over 100 people have checked out my "landing page," which is fantastic. The landing page is the "Who the hell is Mel?" page, designed for folks who have absolutely no idea who Keegan is. So, through Legends, there's 100 potential customers out there who know who MK is now. This also is terrific. You'd happily pay a hundred bucks for this kind of exposure!

The feedback on the format in which this novel was published as been varied indeed:

  • 25% of people were blissfully happy to swing by every day or few days, and get a free hit.
  • 25% of readers said, "I can't read this in bits -- tell me when it's finished, I'll download it all together."
  • 10% of readers said, "I can't read this much on screen. Tell me when a paperback comes out, I'd be happy to buy it."
  • 10% said, "I don't have the time to deal with little bits of reading. I want a properly formatted ebook, even if you charge for it."
  • 15% of readers said, "I like the concept of a free serial novel, but I don't care for fantasy. Tell me when you bring out an SF or thriller novel."
  • 10% of readers said, "I like ebooks, but I can't stand serials (I hate cliffhangers). Tell me when the whole thing's finished.
  • 5% of readers said, "I like fantasy, and serials are okay. but I like my gay fantasy red-hot sexy. Can I get an uncut version of Legends? Would be happy to pay for an ebook.
It's great to have some firm data. So we're doing a newsletter this afternoon, informing people that (drum roll)...
  • the first book of the trilogy is finished (download it all of a piece, if this is what you needed);
  • and a properly structured ebook is being prepared;
  • there can also be a Legends Uncut version, for those who wanted this;
  • and a stunning cover is being put around this novel; it'll be available as a paperback in a few weeks.

This seems to cover everything, and leaves everyone happy.

So, one question remains: when and how will the rest of the trilogy be done?!

At the moment, advertising incomes off the Legends pages won't support the investment of time in the project. This can change at a moment's notice, if word of the novel spreads and readers cotton on to how it's supposed to work. So, at the moment Legends is going onto hiatus while Keegan finishes out the whole Hellgate series. Done by Christmas 2009 -- and that's a firm date. DreamCraft is waiting for the books; their "appointment with design destiny" is Nov/Dec this year. So I need to commit to the project and get it done. Then --

2010: Legends will be finished too.

Will it be done as a free upload?

This depends entirely on how cooperative readers are. A few readers have been thoughtful; most have swung through, downloaded 60 posts of free fiction as fast as the pages would load and save, and zapped out without leaving a "thank you." This can change -- and if it does, I would be very happy to upload Books II and III in the same format as this work.

On the other hand, if 85% of readers aren't even going to say "thanks," I'll zip the novels into ebooks and park the "buy now" buttons on the bottom of the last page of Legends as it exists at this moment. If readers want the rest -- hey, shout me a few dollars. The books can be done as a "web special" for folks who've read the first novel online ... say, a $3 pricetag, which is a nice bonus, since the Kindle (etc.) price would have to be several times higher.

And of course, for those readers who are virtually allergic to ebooks (and you might not believe how many such people there are!) there will be paperbacks with glorious jackets.

So: Legends is on hiatus for '09, while Keegan finishes Hellgate. Look for the rest in early-mid 2010; and with any luck there'll be an upturn in the ad patronage this page receives ... meaning, I'll be able to upload the rest free, too. That would be nice.

Oh, last word here: quite a few readers said they liked the concept, could live with serial fiction, but were not partial to fantasy. Would I be interested in doing another novel this way, on an SF, thriller, or SF-thriller topic? Yes, I would. And it could easily be Crystal Genesis.

As the saying goes, stay tuned! (Be on my mailing list, and we'll keep you posted.)

Cheers to all,
Mel Keegan
Adelaide, April 2009

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The Oracle Dreams



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They lie in each other’s arms in such beauty as makes the gods envious, and for the first time in so long, Iridan, Oracle, is filled with hope. Even to such as I, the future is cloudy, uncertain -- oracle or no, I see nothing clearly, which is the reason for the riddles with which my kind answer kings and carpenters.

They speak is whispers of finding the temple -- and the tomb of my own beloved, my life mate, Hellas, who lived on as a man and fought many years against the legions of Vayal, while I was trapped in the enchanter’s net which holds me still. I see the chasm of the past with painful clarity, where all that is gone is beyond remedy and can only be mourned. I glimpse the ocean of the future through a swirling mist of unformed time. What lies ahead becomes clear only as it draws near to the ‘now’ in which mortal men live and die. Even for the Oracle, all else is dreams.

O, speak thou to Iridan! Only ask thy questions, and his answers shall be as plain as can be wrought by any Seer. Speak to me, Faunos Phinneas Aeson, imbued with the Power … and Soran, vibrant with the courage and strength of youth and love.

Here is the gods’ own truth: youth is steel, but love is stronger.

They speak of plans half-made, and kiss and caress, discovering themselves in each other. They know only that they have far to travel, across waters filled with peril and lands dark with the high magic of forgotten ages. Such are young men’s dreams … Iridan knows the truth, but would not whisper of it even as the price of freedom.

The way ahead is filled with pain, but their solace is each other, and they would choose no other path. Desire is spent, and they kiss softly now, whispering their shared hopes aloud, secrets that, once spoken, are no less binding than vows.

At last the outcast prince of Vayal lays his head upon the witchboy’s breast to hear his heart. Knowest thou, Soranchele Izamal-xiu Ulkan, that heart beats for thee.

Helios is at the glory of his noonday zenith as two galleys from the isles of Incaria make their way west toward the port of Thebes. Far beyond lies Jaymaca, across seas which are the domain of Hurucan. Distant in the east lie the Keloi Shores, as wreathed in mist as are oracles’ dreams and the myth-like memories from the time of time the great ice.

For the moment, Soran and Faunos have forgotten the road ahead. They are young, and love consumes them, as it should; and none save Iridan knows how greatly they will need that love, and each other, on the path they have chosen.


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The Fall of the Atlantean Empire

Chapter Twenty-one - conclusion

The Winds of Chance part five

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“I didn’t say you had -- I said, you must find them.” Soran reached around and dealt a swift, smarting slap to one luscious buttock. “Get out your books and read. What -- you need a taskmaster?” He chuckled richly. “Do I put you over my knee, to make you study?”

Faunos sprang away from him. “You do not! I might not come of age for five years, but I’m no willful, disobedient brat! I’ll study when I have the time and the need.”

“Then pull out your books,” Soran said, amused. “I’ll bring your breakfast, arrange for your bathing water, fresh linen … do you want a bodyslave?”

“Do I -- what?” Faunos was bemused. “I can take care of myself. And I don’t need anyone to wait on me -- I’ll get my own breakfast!”

“You’ll be too busy, pulling out your books.” Soran stood, caught him by the shoulders and looked him up and down in the bright morning sunlight. “You’re the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen, and if you’ve enchanted my eyes, so be it. I want you for my own, lifelong, and in a month from now, or a year, you’ll believe it.” He drew his lips across Faunos’s forehead. “You’ve no need to hide what you are, not from me. I know everything, and I love you in spite of it … or because of it. So get out your books, little one, while I fetch you something to eat.” He stepped away toward the door, and paused. “Priolas and Senmet are going to need a course, after Thebes. You have a few days to tease the first clue out of those books, but since you don’t know where to start, you’ve no time to waste. Fish or eggs?”

“For what?” Faunos was working on the knots in his hair again.

“For breakfast. Fish or eggs.”

As Soran watched, he stooped to pull one of the goatskin bags from under the bunk, and teased out the laces. Even now, Soran’s skin rose in a prickle of gooseflesh as he watched the fine, slender hand dive into the bag. If the Eye of Helios were there --

But when Faunos withdrew his hand he held only an ivory comb, and he sat on the end of the bunk to work on his hair. Dark eyes watched Soran warily, but Soran saw much more in the Zeheftiman’s face. For the first time since they met, he saw hope. A little of the weariness had lifted from Faunos’s shoulders, as if someone had relieved him of a punishing burden.

“And that’s another thing.” Soran glared at the bunk. “That isn’t large enough for two, and this cabin isn’t big enough for rats to raise a litter. Get your things together. We’re moving to something bigger, with more air, better light, and space for two, one of whom is a student who’s going to need room to study.”

Faunos frowned at him. “Soran … don’t make a fool of me. If this is all a trick, it’s cruel.”

“And if it’s all true, the gods answered your prayers,” Soran added. “Have faith, Faunos. Helios has a bad reputation for being the destroyer, but without his light there’s no heat, no life. The world would soon be ice and darkness. If you spoke to him, or to Mayat, or Naxos, is it so impossible for the gods and your great ancestors to whisper into the ears of the three old women who weave the fate of the world on a loom the size of the Cosmos?” He smiled at the confounded and yet ridiculously optimistic look on Faunos’s face. “You asked for safety, life … a guardian, perhaps. They gave you what you wanted. And besides,” he added pragmatically, “if I’m duping you, your friend Afris will have the head off my shoulders, and all this crew will do -- Senmet included! -- is feed my body to the sharks and deny I was ever aboard. I doubt Priolas could stop them, even if he wanted to. And he wouldn't want to.” He gestured at the goatskin which remained under the bed. “Get out the books, and console yourself … a prince of Vayal who should one day have worn the double crown is waiting on you.”

With that he stepped out, leaving Faunos so astounded and outraged, for once in his young life he was speechless. Soran indulged himself in a chuckle as he climbed back to the deck, following the sound of Priolas’s voice.

He and Senmet were standing in the stern, in the shade of the steering oar, and both men wore cautious, pensive faces. Soran already knew Priolas’s thoughts, but he had never worked closely with Senmet. Priolas's cousin was much less predictable.

Senmet’s neck was raw and black with the newly cauterized wound, and he would wear a scar there as long as he lived. Every time he touched it or saw his reflection, he would think of Faunos and feel the weight of debt. The first words out of his mouth were angry.

“You’ll bring a fleet of warships after us,” he accused as Soran approached. “We’ll be paraded on the dock in Vayal, and your father will be standing in the dawn sun with our hearts raw and bleeding in both hands!”

“Senni, for godsakes,” Priolas remonstrated. “There’s no ship behind us.”

“By the time Azhtoc and Druyus reason what happened,” Soran added, “we’ll be long gone from Thebes, with no living soul in possession of our course.”

“What course?” Senmet’s eyes narrowed on him.

But Soran could only shrug. “Give Faunos time to search the books. I saw something like them, in the Library. The myths, the histories -- it’s all there, and he can read languages that look like gibberish to you and me. “Trust him. And trust me, Senmet,” Soran added, “the way Priolas does.”

“Priolas,” Senmet said acidly, “has it in him to be an idiot. I was picking him up and patching his knees before either of us first set foot on a deck.”

“And then I grew taller and broader than you,” Priolas said easily, “and started plucking you out of the troubles you’d get yourself into. Enough, Senni. There’s no imperial ship behind us, and the chance of an incredible fortune before us. You’ve seen what the witchboy can do, and I’ve seen the truth in my lord Soran’s face.”

“Truth?” Senment echoed.

“He’s in love,” Priolas said, amused. “His eyes say it, and his voice, when he speaks of the lad. And that,” he added philosophically, “is good enough for me.”

“Though neither of you have any slightest idea where we’re headed after Thebes,” Senmet grumbled.

Soran chuckled quietly as he leaned on the rail and looked out at the albatross skimming the water to the west. “I can’t give you a course,” he admitted, “but I can tell you we’ll be looking for a temple and a tomb. You know the legends! The Temple of Mayat, lost beneath the waves … somewhere. And the Tomb of Hellas, which was forgotten by history the moment it was sealed.”

With careful fingers Senmet explored the cauterized wound. “I know enough about the legends, but I always believed them to be tales told to children, for amusement.”

“No.” Priolas folded his big arms on his chest and frowned at Soran. “The temple and the tomb, the witchboys, the foci … Soran has breached the Library, seen the books. It’s all true, Senni, and knowing it can be the death of you.” He arched a brow at Senmet. “I see revolution in my lord’s eyes, as well as love. Am I wrong, Soran?”

The observation took Soran unawares, but he did not deny it. “If you mean I’d like to tear Azhtoc and Druyus out of palace and temple, throw Baobo to the victims in his own vaults, and have the truth about Zeheft on the lips of every man and woman in Vayal … then, yes, revolution is in the air.”

“I can smell it,” Senmet said darkly. “Priolas has told me a good deal, my lord. The Old Kingdom was toppled for the sake of greed, the witchboys were hunted down because the Power of Diomedas was the one thing that could bring back Zeheft’s golden days -- the prophecy foretells the One, and this lad of yours, who actually has one of the foci, seems to be that One. And as for me, I’ve standing here today because of him and his magic. So I have to believe.”

“There you have it,” Soran said thoughtfully. “There are older prophecies, Senmet. Before Zeheft was built, the ancients foretold the days when the oceans would drink the isles of the Atlantan, and how the scions of the House of Diomedas would be hunted to the brink of extinction.” He shook his head, still amazed by what he had learned. “I know Faunos better than he realizes. If he could, he would lift Zeheft out of the embrace of the sea, and what he can do for Zeheft, he can do for Vayal.” He stirred restlessly. “So, what say you, Senmet? Priolas has already taken my commission.”

“But I can’t speak for you, Senni, and won’t,” Priolas added. “Make your own decision, cousin. Is the Quezelus for hire?”

At last Senmet laughed, though the sound was harsh and it hurt him. He held his throat gingerly. “These ships are always for hire … especially when I’m imagining a temple filled with magic, a tomb full of gold.” He gave Soran his wrist. “We sail together, as always. What service would you have of me, first?”

“Breakfast,” Soran told him. “I promised the lad breakfast, and then a large cabin with good light and air, something suitable for two, both of whom were once princes among their people.”

“And are now fugitives, rankles and landless,” Priolas added. He dropped a hand on Soran’s shoulder. “Tell your boy to bring his bags over to the Incari. She’s bigger than the Quezelus, and I’ve a cabin that should suit you.”

“I’ll go and get him.” Soran clapped Priolas’s back. “I’m grateful.”

“Don’t be grateful,” Priolas said glibly. “Make us disgustingly rich.”

Several books were open on the bunk when Soran stepped back into the tiny cabin, and Faunos was leafing through another. He dropped both arms about Faunos from behind and kissed his ear. “Bring your bags. We’ll be on the Incari. Tonight you’ll wear your finery for me, show me what the heir to royal Zeheft looks like. Tomorrow you’ll begin teaching me to read this gibberish our forefathers called writing.” He was peering over Faunos’s shoulder at the books, and could make nothing of them.

“Heir to Zeheft,” Faunos echoed. “Witchboy.”

“Whom I love,” Soran added, and mocked himself with a sound of humor. “If I’d known, that night with the water gypsies, where this would end --”

“Nothing has ended.” Faunos set down the book, turned into his arms and offered his mouth for the plundering. “I’m sure Galen and Iridan would say it has barely begun.”


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“You’re not. I’ve thought about it,” Faunos admitted, “a lot since the Quezelus shipped out. But I couldn’t even begin to search till I come properly into the Power. Till I come of age. I told you -- five years if I had a teacher, but I don’t have one, and it’ll likely take closer to a decade for me to puzzle it out for myself.”

“And I told you, I can help,” Soran added, “in more ways than you know.” He caught Faunos by the shoulders, dumped him on the bunk and nuzzled the bruise he had branded into the skin of his neck. The pad of his tongue caressed it and his voice was muffled. “It’s in my own interests to find the foci. I’ve no respect for men like Azhtoc, Druyus, Baobo. But the common people of Vayal deserve to know the truth, and to live.”

“Do they?” Faunos sounded less than convinced.

“They’ve done much to deserve the drowning that’s in store for them, it’s true,” Soran admitted. “They’ve systematically destroyed your people, and they have a price to pay for it. But it was done out of ignorance and superstition, Faunos. Set them a price to pay for their crimes. Make it a high price. Let the guilty pay it, and let the young, who’ve not yet been taught to hate and fear, grow up in a world without priest-kings and witchfinders.” He kissed the hollow of Faunos’s throat. “If you’re the One -- and I have to believe you are -- the prophecy says you’ll tear down the empire. It’s rotten, ready to fall, and I’ll be the last to grieve as it crumbles. But if the ancient books are right, you also have the Power to hold back the sea, to defy the gods themselves. Perhaps the common people of Vayal, unburdened by priests and kings, can begin again.”

“Sweet Helios!” Faunos’s face twisted. “It’s not much you ask of me! And I think you ask too much -- I can’t defy Hurcan! All I want is to find one of the colonies where the Zeheftimen settled, and vanish among them. Let me walk into the midst of people who look and sound like me, and … disappear.”

Soran brushed the copper hair back from his brow and explored the shape of the shell of one ear. Another plain gold sleeper was pierced into the lobe, and he fingered it. “You’ll wear your valuables for me. Soon. Tonight, perhaps, while these two ships make their way to Thebes, and thence into strange waters neither of us knows.”

Again, Faunos groaned. “I don’t understand. You talk in such riddles, you should have been a damned oracle yourself.”

The observation made Soran laugh. “It’ll take months, years, to follow the legends, find the temple and the tomb. So you have all the time in the world to study, become a master in this arcane skill. Become a man.” He arched both brows at Faunos. “Iridan told me to study. He told me as plainly as an oracle can, the foci do exist, and they won’t, can’t, remain lost forever.” He laid one fingertip on Faunos’s nose. “Do you want to live Galen’s dream?”

“Do you?” Faunos looked troubled. “Are you trying to make a fool of me?”

But Soran kissed him, long and hard, to dispel the notion. “If there’s a fool on this ship, it’s probably me. I’ve just thrown over my rank and title, abdicated from any expectation I ever had to wear the double crown, and willingly made myself as fugitive, with the rage of Azhtoc and the lust of Druyus snapping at my heels.” He mocked himself with a wry grin. “And I assure you, Faunos Phinneas Aeson, my lord, the decision wasn’t made lightly.”

The words seem to befuddle Faunos. Soran waited patiently. “Why?” he asked at last, a simple question begging the most complex answers.

Soran had spent the night brooding on the same question, but answers remained far from easy. “Because I’m tired of hunting down souls like you, so Druyus can maim and kill you.” These were the thoughts that had haunted him, but they sounded odd, being clothed in words. “Because I’ve learned the lie Azhtoc is perpetuating. Because I believe Vayal will be destroyed at the whim of Hurucan and Volcos, while Azhtoc and Druyus are too interested in protecting their rank and wealth to do anything to stop it happening.” He heard the anger in his own voice, and took a deep breath. The next took a great deal of courage. “Because I have the blind faith in the One described in the prophecy … and because I love you.”

How difficult it was to say it. The words were almost trapped in his throat, unspoken -- not because they were untrue, but because the admission inspired more fear than any demon that ever escaped from the gates of Hados. He girded his loins and looked into Faunos’s face.

The Zeheftiman wore a deep frown. His eyes were solemn. “You know your business, I suppose,” Faunos admitted. “But if it’s the people of Vayal you want to rescue, it’d be easier to use your own fortune to buy a fleet of ships, and invite them to flee over the horizon when Hurucan and Volcos decide the moment of doom has arrived.”

“It would,” Soran agreed. “I thought this much, too. But if it were possible to save Vayal … if the Power were enough to fetch back Zeheft …” He lifted one brow at Faunos. “You’re not the slightest bit intrigued?”

“Of course I am,” Faunos muttered.

“And it doesn’t move you at all,” Soran pressed, “that I love you?”

“It would,” Faunos admitted, “if I believed it, but those words are too easy to say, and they’re said far too often -- and every time they’re uttered, they make trouble.”

A groan of sheer frustration escaped Soran’s chest. “You still think I’m trying to deceive you?”

“Or perhaps you’re deceiving yourself,” Faunos allowed. “Don’t wound me, Soran. I’ve done nothing to earn such harsh punishment.”

With a soft curse, Soran caught him in both arms and crushed the breath out of him. “I’ve thought of nothing but you since the night you walked out on me, in the gypsy camp.”

Faunos whispered something in a language far too old for Soran to know what he had said. “I’ve dreamed of you,” he confessed. “I don’t deny I behaved badly that night. I behaved like a houri, and you treated me like one. It was a lover I wanted.”

“And you won one,” Soran said sharply. “Or do you mean it was a beloved you wanted? Because you won one of those, too, though you didn’t know it at the time.” He held Faunos’s face against his shoulder and kissed the warm crown of his head. “No matter. It may take days and weeks for me to convince you I’m speaking the truth, but eventually, you’ll learn to trust me.”

“Eventually?” Faunos echoed, and wriggled loose to see Soran’s face. “You’re staying, then? This ship is bound for Thebes, it’s not turning around, back to Vayal?”

“We’re going to drop off this ridiculous cargo in Thebes and then victual for a long, long expedition.” Soran glanced out through the sternports at the inviting, forbidding expanse of the ocean. “Somewhere in those books of yours there’ll be clues, pointers, stories, legends in which are buried grains of truth. The clues to the location of the tomb and the temple will be there, I’m certain of it. And you have the skills to read those books. You’ll find the clues. The Incaria and the Quezelus will get us there.”

The green Keltoi eyes were wide. “My gods,” Faunos whispered hoarsely, “you’re serious.”

“Absolutely serious.” Soran stretched every bone and muscle. “I’ve already told Priolas everything I know, and he’s taken the commission. The Incari sails for me. At this moment, Priolas is telling his kinsman Senmet everything he learned from me -- everything Iridan told me, and all I was able to learn in the Library. Then they’ll be looking at you, my sweet, for answers ... and you’d better have them, since two ships and two crews will be languishing, waiting for a word from you.”

“Answers?” Faunos echoed. “I don’t have any answers!”


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“Will I stop?” Faunos murmured. “A word, and I’ll stop.”

“No -- no.” Soran barely recognized his own voice. He shifted down on the bunk, took a handful of the linen of Faunos’s wrap and heard it tear at his hip. His own wrap slithered onto the deck after it, and he felt the blood-heat of a shaft as hard as his own as he shifted down again, inspired to do something he had never done in his life before.

He had never actually tasted a man on his tongue, never imagined wanting to, though he had been with the most beautiful courtesans in the empire. But Faunos Phinneas Aeson was no courtesan. He was a prince, no less than was Soran, and a freeman. And unexpectedly, Soran’s mind and body caught alight.

Was the blaze inside him some thread of Zehefti magic, breathed into him? Or was it just Faunos himself, who lay gasping under Soran’s hands and mouth, head arched back into the cushions, hands clenching and unclenching as he tried to command the Power, the so-called Curse of Diomedas. He did not have to struggle to control it, not now, but the habits of a young lifetime would be hard to break.

If it were some breath of Zehefti enchantment that made Soran’s nerves and thoughts ignite, so be it, he decided. Faunos was clean and hot and male in his hands, gloriously young. Desire arced between them like the blinding trident of Hurucan, which tore up the sky when the storm was at its darkest. The divine flame of Aphrataya burned with a pure white light.

How many men had Soran known, in how many years? None of them were like this, and if he were bewitched, he was grateful for it. Every courtesan he had ever known was his father’s choice: bathed and perfumed, schooled in the ‘manners’ -- taught to dance, sing, converse, and then give the prince of Vayal whatever he desired for his pleasure, no matter what he wanted, or how.

This was so different, and Soran’s heart beat like a drum. Wild little sounds issued from Faunos’s chest. His legs wrapped around Soran’s shoulders and hugged him close. Every atom in Faunos’s body, every thought in his mind, wanted this as a freeman, as a lover who had never been taught the manners --

And then it began. Out of nowhere, Soran was breathing the scents of the drowned lands, watching the sparkles of light begin to shimmer around the long, tanned limbs, even in broad daylight. This time he made sure his eyes were open, and he marveled.

He stroked, caressed, tickled, for long, delicious minutes, learning to play Faunos with hands and tongue, as if he were a harp. A nimbus surrounded the witchboy, almost but not quite fully visible. The scents of jasmine and bergamot strengthened, and the body in Soran’s hands was pliable, malleable, as if it weighed nothing. He might have picked up Faunos, held him without effort with one hand.

With a soft curse, Soran lifted his head away, set him down and covered him again, hip to hip, shoulder to shoulder. He pinned Faunos against bunk, hands tangled in the mass of copper hair. In moments he had his breath back, and was moving again, humping strongly.

When Faunos’s hands raced down his back and clenched into his buttocks to pull two bodies so close together they might have been one, Soran surged up. It was many years since he had lost control of himself utterly, and he wondered if it were the Zehefti enchantment again. Pleasure streamed through him like a flood of warm oil, and to his astonishment the witchboy spent himself a moment later.

Jasmine and bergamot mingled with the musky scents of men, and Soran breathed deeply of it, wanting to savor it, remember it, as if part of him still fretted that this might be the last time. He forced himself up on both elbows and shook his head to clear it of the mist shrouding his thoughts.

He blinked down into Faunos’s face, saw the tears sparkling on his lashes, and licked them away. Faunos’s eyes remained closed. “Did you enchant me?” Soran whispered. “Was this a taste of the Zehefti enchantment I’ve been taught to dread?”

“Perhaps,” Faunos said, as if speaking at all were a monumental effort. “I can’t control what happens to me, Soran. I never could. I’m sorry, if I frightened you or disgusted you. There’s years of study left ahead of me -- five years, even if I had a teacher. Longer, since all I have is the books.”

Soran summoned the last particle of his vitality to crawl onto the bunk beside him, and laid his head on the cushions. “I can help you. What I know of the Power isn’t much, but I’m not too stupid, and I’m willing to learn. Teach me the ancient alphabets, the old language. And you can practice commanding this Power of yours while I do deliciously unspeakable things to you.” He opened one eye and found himself looking into green Zehefti irises. “There’s many things, sensual things, your old teacher wouldn’t have done to you for all the silver in Vayal … but I’d relish the chance.”

“You said a moment ago, you’d never hurt me,” Faunos said quietly.

“I never will,” Soran agreed. “But I was taught the arts and guiles of the bedchamber by the most skillful courtesans in the empire. You’ve never even imagined most of what I know, what I’ve seen and done.” He splayed his right hand over Faunos’s concave belly, idly painting in the seed of royal Zeheft and royal Vayal which was abandoned there, cold now, and forlorn. “I can show you the place where sweetness is so intense, it feels savage, and savagery is tamed into sweetness … if you’ll let me.”

“I’ll let you,” Faunos whispered. “I know what you want, Soran. I’ve already given it to you -- twice, unless memory plays tricks on me! I don’t mind. I’ve never been half so excited in my life as when you rode me, sundered me, plucked virginity from me ... and it was yours to take. You came of age a while ago. I know what you need. It’s only right for a man.”

“You’re also a man,” Soran scoffed.

“Not for five years,” Faunos said darkly, as if he resented the time. “Your people and mine will call me a boy that long.”

“You won’t want to ride me for five years?” In the same moment, Soran was relieved and disappointed.

“I didn’t say that.” Faunos sat up, reached for the linen wrap Soran had torn, and used it to mop sketchily at them both. “But I wouldn’t presume on your affections. Not while lords and ladies have already drunk to your health at your coming of age banquet, and any kingdom I ever aspired to lies at the bottom of the bay. I’ve no teacher, no guardian, yet you won’t drink to my coming of age for years yet, and I’m mindful of that.”

Soran tugged the pillow to comfort under his head and watched him with lazy admiration. “Rank and title are no matter. Vayal will follow Zeheft soon enough.” He stroked a line around Faunos’s shoulders, across his breast and belly. “If this is the Zehefti enchantment … I’ll have more of it. Much more.”

For a moment Faunos struggled to understand. “You want to travel with me? Because travel I must. There’s no way back, if you want to stay with me.”

“Or will you be staying with me?” Soran countered.

Fauos dragged his fingers though the mass of his hair, deliberately working the snarls out of it. “You don’t know where I’m going.”

But Soran only shook his head, slowly and emphatically. “There are only two places you could be going. I’m prepared to bet those beautiful eyes of yours are focused on both, and you’ll reach your destinations eventually. Your teacher had a dream. I think you want to live it for him.” Faunos was waiting, and Soran gestured vaguely into the east. “Find the two missing foci, the Eyes of Mayat and Hados. You’ll spend your life hunting for the temple and the tomb. Tell me I’m wrong.”

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As he spoke, he drew a long, deliberate caress about Faunos’s body, cherishing every sensitive place, neglecting nothing, until Faunos could barely breathe and the linen wrap he wore was stretched taut. Soran rested his palm on the hard warmth there, and leaned down to kiss both the gold-ringed nipples.

“I dishonor myself with lust,” Faunos said hoarsely. “My own flesh betrays me.”

“Your mortal flesh has more sense than your mind and heart will admit,” Soran argued. “It knows what it wants, and has no hesitation about saying so, in its own way. You can’t lie to me, Faunos, not when your body says so eloquently, ‘touch me, hold me, mate me and love me.’”

The Zehefti youth blinked up at him, dark eyed and feverish. “Is this why you’re here? A hundred courtesans in the palace and temple won’t do, you have to have me again? You risked everything you were, everything you had, to be with a witchboy again?”

A self-mocking smile lifted one corner of Soran’s wide mouth. “Yes … and no. Yes, it was desire that set my feet on this particular hunting trail! And then, no … much more brought me out past the Myrmidae.”

“I don’t understand.” Faunos sagged back into the bunk and closed his eyes. “You speak in riddles -- you’re as bad as the damned oracles. Worse, because you have the power of plain speech and won’t use it.”

Soran permitted a chuckle, and perched on the edge of the bunk. “How odd you should say that.” Faunos peered at him through slitted eyes. Soran caressed him, his breast, his belly, and said quietly, “I did as you bade me.”

“You did …? Faunos echoed, as if he could not recall what he had said to Soran that night.

The caressing hands were most likely making his thoughts rush apart, Soran knew. Gratified, he redoubled his efforts. He liked Faunos this way, a little flushed, dark eyed with desire, breathing heavily and struggling manfully to keep his mind on the subject.

“I went to the Temple of Mayat,” he said softly. “I knew you’d gone out on a ship, though I didn’t know which. A little weasel called Keffek was eager to betray you for a coin tossed into the sand. It was just blind luck you chose this ship. You couldn’t possibly have known the Quezelus and the Incari run together like sisters. Or that Priolas and Senmet are second or third cousins, related through the aunts and nieces of so many clans, no one is sure of the lineage any longer.” He leaned down again and kissed Faunos’s throat. “And I did as you bade me. I spoke to Iridan.”

The strange green eyes were open to slits. Faunos’s voice was soft and husky. “You challenged the Oracle to tell you if I had lied to you. And Iridan told you -- what? I had said nothing but truth.”

The gold rings in Faunos’s nipples seduced Soran’s tongue. “What do you wear here, when you dare to display your valuables?”

“Soran!” Faunos insisted. “Speak plainly, for godsakes!”

He gave the gold rings a final tug with careful teeth, and sat up. “I did speak plainly. You’ll wear your valuables for me. When you’ve been seen in my company, no one will dare touch your things, nor insult you with word or gesture. And yes, Iridan told me -- in the most infuriating riddles, mind you! -- about the Power, the foci, the past, the future. Your part in it and, perhaps, mine.” He took his hands away and let Faunos think. The dark Zehefti eyes, so like Keltoi eyes, cleared a little as he watched. “Iridan believes you have the Power to hold back the sea. To deny Hurucan and Peseden. He wouldn’t answer clearly, no matter how I framed a question, but I’m sure he doesn’t know where the Eye of Mayat and the Eye of Hados are.”

Faunos took a deep breath, held it, let it out slowly. “No one does, not in centuries.”

“Yes.” Soran laid one finger on the lush young lips to silence him. “Iridan told me to study. Learn. I took him at his word, and broke into the Library.”

“You -- what?” Faunos was shocked.

“A priest-scribe died to keep secret my presence there,” Soran said grimly. “I sent him out of this life without pain or fear, but still, I took his life. Druyus and Azhtoc know by now that someone broke into the Library, but not who it was, nor what was read. Soon enough they’ll know their precious witchfinder is missing, and thereafter … well, it won’t take them long to reason who was in the Library.”

“Your neck is in a noose,” Faunos said quietly. “You might not be able to talk your way out of the trouble you’ve brought on yourself.”

The observation was as keen as it was simple. Soran smiled faintly at him, toying absently with the gold rings, which made Faunos whimper and curse. “I’ve no desire to go back. Well, not empty handed, at least. There’s nothing to be done for Vayal. What did you call it? The kingdom of crabs and turtles. My home will be drowned, and my people will be extinct, if they don’t have the sense to get out and run, while they can. Like the Zeheftimen.” He shook his head slowly. “I can do nothing for Vayal while fools like Azhtoc and Druyus hold the reins. But --” He frowned deeply at Faunos, stooped to kiss his throat and mouth. “I read part of a book. It might be something like one of your own books. A history of Zeheft, its magic, its greatness … its doom. I learned … things. Truths.” His voice fell away to a whisper. “I never knew any of this, Faunos. I swear on my life, I didn’t.”

“I believe you.” Moved, touched, Faunos spoke gently. “They made you what you are -- or were. The witchfinder. But I don’t see the amulet on your breast this morning. Have you set aside your swords?”

“No. I’ll bear arms again,” Soran admitted, “but not for Vayal. At least, not for Azhtoc and the rest of them. If I pick up a sword again, it’ll be to keep you safe.”

He traced the shape of Faunos’s mouth, and smiled when the soft lips parted, and his finger was taken between Faunos’s teeth, held there, caressed by the boy’s tongue. Soran swung one leg over him, straddled his flat belly and gave Faunos the favors of both his hands, until Faunos moaned woundedly.

“You’re the last alive who commands the Power, as far as anyone knows,” Soran murmured. “The future for Vayal, as well as Zeheft, lies in your hands. There’s no one else.” He settled on Faunos, heavy on him, matched shoulder for shoulder and hip for hip, and kissed his mouth hard. Memories of the gypsy camp overwhelmed him, and he wanted Faunos’s arms around him, if only he dared cut the bonds and release him. “I didn’t come here to hunt you, or hurt you,” he said against the witchboy’s soft, open mouth. “Be sure of this. Trust me, and I’ll release you.”

“You could have killed me a hundred times over,” Faunos whispered. “Since I’m still alive, I’d better have a little faith. Let me go.”

Soran lifted his head. “I don’t know how to make you trust me, save like this.” For a moment he let Faunos feel his full, considerable weight, and sank his teeth into the boy’s neck at the place where it curved into his shoulder. Her bit down hard enough to leave a bruise like a brand of ownership, but not to break the skin. Faunos gave a sharp yelp, but before he had registered pain, let alone fear, Soran kissed what he had bruised, licked the brand to soothe, and said against the boy’s ear, “I’ll never hurt you.”

“Let me go,” Faunos said brokenly. “I’m a freeman, no less than yourself.”

“A prince, no less than myself,” Soran added. He had slip-tied the straps, and one tug released Faunos’s hands, a second, his feet. He might have made some jest about Faunos being free to take vengeance, but the slender arms went about him at once. Faunos tangled his hands in the cloak of Soran’s hair, pulled his head down and kissed him, long, deep, slow.

Fingertips massaged Soran’s scalp, finding tender places, sensitive places, making him tingle with reaction from head to foot and cry out onto Faunos’s mouth. The fingers on his scalp might have been discovering his body’s most intimate secrets.

He shivered as he found himself hard as iron, and for a moment lifted his head from the witchboy’s mouth.“What are you doing to me?”

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The Winds of Chance

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“You thought I’d let you disappear?” Soran asked quietly. “Naïve, Faunos. Foolish. You’re brighter than that.” He stepped closer and dropped the cloak, hoping the young Zeheftiman would notice the absence of the gold and platinum amulet from his breast. No sword hung at his hip, no dirk.

He came to the Quezelus absolutely unarmed, without the warrant of his office -- without anything but the desire to stop Faunos and talk with him as freemen talked. Faunos appeared to have frozen, he was barely breathing. Soran had more than half expected a fight, or flight, and realized that no part of this meeting would be as he had anticipated. He moderated his voice, sweetened his tone. “Where were you going?”

The witchboy’s shoulders first lifted in a shallow shrug, and then slumped visibly. “I don’t know. Anywhere you wouldn’t find me, I suppose. First, to Thebes, because that’s where this ship is headed. And then another ship to … somewhere. Anywhere.”

“Thebes?” Soran took another step closer. “Thebes is a nest of vipers! You’re damned lucky you haven’t sailed headlong into pirates already, and I shudder to think what would have become of you.”

“We did sail into pirates,” Faunos said tersely. “And Senmet is still breathing this morning because I disobeyed everything my teacher ever said.” His eyes glittered, the green and gold sparklets danced in them, even in sunlight. “I killed a man. I sent some swaggering, stinking baboon by the name of Eudoros into the embrace of Hados.”

Now Soran checked, knowing he should believe what Faunos said, and yet struggling to. Even the witchfinder knew the name of Eudoros -- the man was notorious. He had murdered, raped and pillaged his way around the skirts of the empire for more than ten years. Both Priolas and Senmet had crossed swords with him several times. Eudoros was dead? This slip of a boy, not yet even come of age, had killed him?

“How?” he asked, feeling winded, as if he had been punched.

“With his own axe.” Faunos looked away. “A big double-curved axe, like the ones venerated by the worshippers of the bull. I buried his weapon in his gut, deep as his spine, one second before he would have cut Senmet’s throat with the same axe. You don’t believe me? Ask Senmet! Ask Afris -- he was there, he saw it.”

Soran took a long deep breath and glanced sidelong at the big Nubiyen, who was hovering -- close enough to hear every word, and quite close enough to get between Soran and Faunos in two long strides, if the witchfinder had come to claim his quarry. “Peace, Afris,” he said quietly. “You know me.”

The lion-maned head tilted at him. “I know you as the witchfinder, my lord … but to this little one from Zeheft, we owe a debt, all of us. We live today, and are free, because of him.” He gestured at Faunos, and his voice dropped to a rasping murmur. “Eudoros once swore he would flay my back for a pair of sandals, take my teeth for a necklace, and let me rot at the oar of a galley till flies and fleas ate me alive.”

“The sunlight is brighter, the wind is sweeter, with Eudoros gone out of the world. And you’ll notice,” Soran said deliberately, jerking a thumb at his own breast, “I’ve no amulet, no sword, no weapon. Does it look like I came here as Vayal’s witchfinder?” He met Faunos’s dark, stormy eyes levelly, but spoke to Afris. “The witchboy and I must talk, and privately. Faunos, do you have a cabin, or did they bunk you with the crew?”

“I have a cabin.” Faunos’s voice was shaky, filled with uncertainty. Soran waited. Afris was poised like a dancer on the balls of his feet, ready to pounce, and for a moment Soran was sure Faunos would tell him to do it. And then Faunos said hoarsely, “I can at least listen to what he wants to say, Afris. I should be safe, if he knows you’ll wring his neck like a chicken if he does me harm.”

Afris dropped a stiff bow and stood aside. “My lord,” he said to Soran with acid sweetness, “be assured, this is exactly what I’ll do.”

“Be assured,” Soran told him, “doing the Zeheftiman harm is the last reason I came here. Trust me now, as you always have.” And before Afris could change his mind, he laid a hand on Faunos’s shoulder to get his moving.

The boy led the way down and aft, into a cubicle much smaller than the shepherd’s hut. Its only virtue was privacy. With an expression of disdain, Soran gave it one glance, and then deliberately threw the bolt on the door and stood in front of it.

He folded his arms on his breast and studied Faunos broodingly. The boy looked so tired, weary to the bone, and yet so beautiful. “You’re lucky,” Soran whispered. “On any other ship I know, you could have been drugged in your sleep and bound hand and foot. You’d be on your way back to Vayal this morning -- or more likely to a market in Karnossos, where beauties like yourself fetch the best prices.”

“And now you’ll kill me,” Faunos said hoarsely, “so what does it matter? I lived an extra day. Should I be so grateful to see one more sunset, one more dawn?” He sat on the edge of the bunk and pressed his face into his hands. “Don’t take me back. They’d have my hide and my bones for nothing, since I can’t tell your priests any more than they already know. I’m the last. There’s no one left to be named, and betrayed, and I have no idea where the other two foci are. No one knows.” His eyes closed and his chin bowed onto his chest. “I haven’t the skill to fight you. Or the strength. You don’t see the Eye of Helios on my wrist, so what chance have I? Don’t take me back, Soran. Kill me, quick and clean, as you promised in Zeheft.”

The monologue was spoken in a low, defeated voice, and Soran’s heart went out to him. “You’ve lost everything, haven’t you? Your people are scattered and gone, your teacher is dead, your family is either dead or so far away, you might never find them. What little remained of Zeheft is burned to cinders.”

Faunos did not look up. “I am the last prince of royal Zeheft … the lord of crabs and fishes, for my kingdom lies in the ocean now. I have nothing.”

“You’re the custodian of the secrets of a lost age,” Soran whispered. “The old high magicks of your people are alive in you. Faunos? Faunos, look at me.” Still, he did not lift his head, and Soran sighed. “How can I make you believe, I didn’t come here to hurt you? Harming you is the last thought on my mind.” His voice was dark, purring. “I came here to do many things to you, but dealing death isn’t one of them.”

At last Faunos looked up, confused, exhausted -- wary as a lame old wolf. “What do you want of me?”

“Will you hear me out?” Soran asked quietly. “The way you made me listen to you, when you bound me in thrall, before Zeheft was burned.”

“Why should I have any interest in a word you have to say?” Faunos demanded.

Soran heard the weary resentment and only smiled. “You will, when you’ve heard me. But I don’t trust you not to get your hands on that gem again, and if you do, you can overpower me like that.” He snapped his fingers. “If you want to live, and prosper, you’ll listen to me. You’ll also let me bind you for my own safety -- not with magicks, for I don’t have the gift. I do believe you could call the name of Afris, and perhaps even Senmet himself, and they’d rush in here and beat me bloody! So you’ll let me bind you while you hear me out. Yes?”

Dumbfounded, confused, Faunos first bridled in outrage and the nodded mutely. Large eyed, he watched as Soran unwound several lengths of soft leather from the girdle at his hips. When Soran gave him a shove onto the bunk, he went down, stayed down, and the leather bound his wrists over his head and his ankles to the foot of the bunk’s wooden frame.

“One shout from my throat,” Faunos said breathlessly, “and Afris will be in here. The bolt on that door won’t stop him.”

“I’ll give you no reason to call out,” Soran swore. “You’ll hear every word I say, and then you’ll tell me where your heart lies. I’ve taken terrible risks to come after you. If I return to Vayal without you, it’ll be me in the vaults, while Druyus amuses himself with my agonies, for he and Azhtoc will assume -- rightly! -- I know some fraction of your secrets. What you are, what you can do, where you’ve gone. They’re right. I do know a great deal. I know your name, I’ve seen the Eye of Helios, and I’ve seen you use it. I know you’re headed for Thebes, and the ship you’re aboard … and I know you’re the One foretold by the prophecy.”

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“Your teacher was wise,” Afris said without hesitation. “He knew Vayal will pay a bounty for your kind, and there’s no shortage of vermin infesting the ports of Ilios and Incaria who’d betray you for silver, and take your books.”

“You’ve seen the books?” Faunos gave a start.

“No. But when I lifted you onto the barrels I saw the goatskins…” Afris frowned deeply at him. “I saw the jewel, and I know the legends. I didn’t believe they were true, but I know them. That jewel, and you, are worth a prince’s ransom. There’s little Mahanmec Azhtoc would not do, or pay, to get his talons into your flesh.”

Faunos swallowed hard on a dry, painful throat. “I know. Will I be cautious, aboard this ship? Your fellows might not betray me, but the stone, the books --?”

“Guard them well.” Afris stooped for the wine jar, drank a long draught from it, and passed it to Faunos. “Guard yourself just as well! It could be the jewel they desire -- or more likely your sweet arse! -- but probably both. Sleep with one ear open.”

“Damn.” Faunos knuckled his eyes. “I will. How long before we reach Thebes?”

“You’re leaving us?” Afris was surprised. “You’ll find no safety in Thebes, boy, if it’s bountymen and witchfinders you’re fretted about.”

“But I can try to disappear there,” Faunos said softly. “I’ll hide a while, and then take another ship, go further out where less is known about people like me. Perhaps in time I can find one of the Zehefti colonies, and vanish utterly among people who look like me.”

The Nubiyen seemed unconvinced. “No matter how far you run, the rumors will race ahead of you. You can’t outrun what you are.”

“Then I'll die.” Faunos closed his eyes, too tired to struggle with the future any longer. “It would be wise to dispose of the Eye of Helios, and the books, before I perish. If they fall into the wrong hands, they might change the world yet again, and I doubt it would be for the good of mankind.”

For some time they were silent, trading the wine jar back and forth, and at length Afris said thoughtfully, “Speak to Senmet. He’s wiser than I, better traveled, and he can read, which is a skill I respect and envy. You need,” he said deliberately, “a protector. A guardian. What happened to your teacher?”

It was oddly painful to speak of it. “He died last night. Zeheft is his pyre.” Faunos looked away. “He was half drowned in the storm, and never really recovered. I could do nothing for him, not even fetch a physician.”

He heard the pain in his own voice, and Afris’s long sigh. “We’ve all lost kinsmen,” the Nubiyen said sadly. “These times we live in will be sung of for ten thousand years, but they won’t be happy songs.” One large brown hand dropped on Faunos’s shoulder. “Speak with Senmet tomorrow. I’ve sailed with him for years, and I trust him as much as Priolas trusts him.”

“Priolas?” Faunos echoed. He had not yet heard the name.

But Afris only shrugged. “He’s the captain of the Incaria, the galley that runs in convoy with us on almost every voyage. When the two ships run together, the pirates let us pass … and after today, they’ll not stop us again. Not when the word will travel like wildfire between the islands. We have a sorcerer aboard.”

The words inspired a shiver. Faunos hugged himself as the evening wind became chill. “It won’t take long for the story to get back to Vayal that you have a Zehefti witchboy with you. You can expect the witchfinders to be waiting for you in every imperial port.”

“It’ll take six months, a year,” Afris said with a shrug. “By then, who knows where we shall be? Senmet and Priolas have ordered our destiny for years, and both crews have prospered. Have faith, at least until you hear their wisdom. Lie low in Thebes and listen for Priolas’s name. The Incaria will be headed there soon enough with some cargo or another.”

The brightest stars had begun to glitter, and Faunos was aware of a bone-deep weariness. His eyes were heavy, and when Afris gave him a gentle shove in the direction of his cabin, he was pleased to obey.

The night wind from the sternports was cool, clean. The moon was up, casting a river of silver across the ocean. He sat on the bunk, watching it until sleep stole over his mind, and wished he could accept the invitation to stay aboard. It was kindly made, but Afris had not considered the consequences; Senmet surely would.

A few months, then -- a year at the longest, while the story of where he was, who he was, filtered back to Vayal. Soran Izmal-xui Ulkan would hear it, the day the tale arrived on the waterfront. Months from now, he would surely still be smarting after the scene in the shepherd’s hut. Had he believed a word of the histories, the truths, Faunos had told him?

At the time, Soran had believed, but in the cold blue light of day he would begin to doubt again. He would be back in Vayal by now, Faunos thought as he slithered down onto the bunk and pulled a cushion under his head. He would be back in the palace, bathed and perfumed, with a bodyslave grooming his raven-black hair, courtesans waiting to be chosen for the night, the finest of food and music waiting for him. And his father, ready with every argument the priest-kings of Vayal had always made to convince their people of the evils of Zeheft.

Well fed, wined and bedded, Soran would look back on the scene in the ruins and wonder how he had let the wicked creature overcome him, why he had not simply stalked him when he had the chance, and knocked the wits out of him before Faunos had even realized he was there. He could have done it so easily, and Faunos was at a loss to know why he had not.

The puzzle was too much, and he was too tired to wrestle it down. He watched the stars until his vision faded, his eyes lost focus, and he drifted into dreams without realizing he was asleep. But they were not good dreams, and though his sleep was sound, deep, he was troubled.

He had lost his time sense when he jerked awake, and as he eyes sprang open he saw the first light of true dawn. He was cold under the open sternport, but the chill was welcome. He rubbed his arms, wondering what had woken him, and then it came again -- Senmet’s voice, up on deck, calling out across the calm water.

“My gods, you made fast time! What demon’s behind you, to fetch you out here at such speed? What did you bribe the crew with, to keep them at the oars so long?”

A voice answered. It was too far off for Faunos to catch what it said, but he knew it had to come from another vessel. Not a pirate ship this time -- Senmet was laughing as he shouted to a friend. A moment later he called, “No matter -- come aboard and have breakfast with us. I have amazing things to tell you!” He stopped to listen, and laughed again. “No, it’s not something I want to bellow at the top of my lungs!

With eyes still full of sleep, Faunos grabbed a cloak and stumbled out of the tiny cabin. The morning chill woke him quickly. He joined Afris by the deckhouse and took the offered beaker of mango juice, but Afris was to busy to talk. The other galley was coming alongside rapidly. Grapnels had already been thrown over in both directions, and strong hands gathered along the rails to pull the vessels together and secure them.

A tall, copper-skinned Incariman in silks and gold hopped lightly over onto the deck of the Quezelus. Senmet embraced him like a brother and beckoned him to the captain’s plush cabin in the stern. “Come and eat with me, Priolas -- you won’t believe what I have to tell you.”

“Nor what I have to tell you,” the tall, striking Priolas said in a voice almost as rich and deep as Afris’s. He glanced once over his shoulder before he followed Senmet. “Come aboard,” he called back to his own ship, beckoning. “I’ll talk privately with Senmet, but I’ll not be long.”

He had called to a blue-cloaked man who wore his hood up to conceal his face. Faunos watched the man vault the rail with the grace of an athlete and land lightly. As he found his feet on the deck of the Quezelus, the hood slithered back and down, and the morning sun fell full in his face.

Faunos felt the blood drain from every extremity, and his head was light, dizzy. He stepped back against the deckhouse, but there was nowhere to run. So this was where it ended, after all of Galen’s dreams and plans. His life was forfeit on the deck of a battered trading galley, a mere day’s voyage beyond the Myrmidae.

The most crucial thing Faunos could think of was to destroy the books, to get the Eye of Helios into a sack, weight it and throw it into the sea, where it would be lost forever. His heart hammered against his ribs as he lifted his chin and met the newcomer’s crackling blue eyes.

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“I saved myself at the same time.” Faunos picked up his wrap and tied it on, for he was keenly aware of Afris’s dark eyes devouring him alive. The Nubiyen towered over Senmet, with dark velvet skin, luminous eyes and a lion’s mane of blond-streaked hair. “I didn’t care for the idea of being sold in some market in Karnossos,” Faunos said acidly, and then hesitated. “What’s to … become of me?”

The captain was clearly musing on the same thoughts. “Much depends on yourself, boy. I’m grateful for my life … my vessel, even my cargo! But I’ll give you fair warning. Use the enchantment against me or my crew in any way, and I shall certainly find a way to dump you overboard. And if you are indeed the incubus --”

“I’ll be celibate,” Faunos said quickly, “as I have always been.”

“Always?” Senmet’s brows arched. “A virgin?”

“All save one night,” Faunos confessed. “One lover, one night.” He shrugged awkwardly. “I should never have come back to these shores, but I was born not far from the old city of Zeheft. Part of me thought to come home.” He stooped to lift the bags up onto the barrels, and swiftly put away the gem and the bracelet. “Just take me as far as Thebes. You can leave me there. I’ll make my own way.”

“Perhaps.” Senmet was nursing his throat; speaking was difficult. “But you have that thing in your possession … and I’ve no desire to challenge you. I’ve no doubt you could bind me to your wishes.”

Faunos was still trembling in reaction to what he had done. It was the first life he had taken, and the shock of killing was more than he had imagined. He rubbed his arms hard enough to bring them up in ruddy weals. “I wouldn’t use the Power against you. I’ll harm no one, my word on it.”

“And oddly enough,” Senmet said slowly, “I’m inclined to believe you. Afris, what think you?” He looked sidelong at the ship’s mate, and Afris’s lion-maned head nodded. “Take care that you stand on your honor, boy,” Senmet growled to Faunos, and then held out a hand to Afris. “For godsakes, get me out of the hold, get me the surgeon. I feel --”

“You’re pale as scrubbed ivory,” Afris informed him, and tilted his head back to look up at the men on deck. “Send down a rope, haul him out, and shout for the butcher.”

The deck was busy, flooding as it was doused with seawater to wash away a torrent of blood. Eight bodies lay under a sheet of canvas, and as Senmet’s wound was cauterized with a sizzling iron, he listened to the tally of grief. Ten more men were injured; two would not live long, and two more were below decks, screaming as smashed limbs were removed.

“Yet I'd say we fared well,” Senmet said grimly, to Faunos’s surprise. “It could have been much worse -- it’s been much worse in the past. I’ve hunted my people into slave markets between here and Aegyptos … and never found some of them. But we’ll not see that ship, that crew, again. Eudoras’s body?”

“Fish food,” Afris said with fat satisfaction. “The Trident pulled out fast, as soon as we got the better of them. With Eudoras dead, the rest are no better than rats and roaches. If we weren’t so laden with cargo, I’ll be saying, chase her down.”

The iron sizzled again, and Senmet lost a shade more color while Faunos watched. Afris grasped his hand hard enough to break his bones, and Senmet swore in a curious rasp. Sweat rolled off him and he sagged back against the mast. “Get us moving, Afris,” he gasped. “I’ll sleep for a while. And you, boy …” He held out one shaking hand to Faunos. “I do thank you for my life.”

The Quezelus was undamaged, and the setback had cost them only a few hours. As Faunos watched, the vessel got back underway -- the deck tipped under his feet as the sail caught the following wind, the vast blade of the steering oar bit on a sharp angle, and the dead were sent to Peseden.

For Eudoras’s men, there were no rituals, no prayers or honors; but for the Quezelus’s own dead the full rites were sung. Four of the crew were eunuchs from Ilios and Nefti, and their voices were glorious. They sang as powerfully as men, in tones as high and pure as women. Afris’s vast chest gave his bass richness and volume which made Faunos shiver, as the litany for the dead was sung to Mayat, Hados and Naxos.

Aboard any kind of vessel, grief was a personal thing. Kinsmen and friends drew together and wept, while the greater crew continued to work as if nothing had happened. Only the big double-curved axe, taken out of Eudoros’s belly as a trophy, told the story. Afris had mounted it on the wall of the deckhouse, ahead of the steersman’s place.

It was still dirty with the bridgand’s blood, and Faunos could barely bring himself to look at it. Eudoros was his first blood, as soldiers called it -- less than a day after Galen’s passing, a matter of hours after the ship headed out of Vayal’s own waters. He glared at Helios, and spoke to Mayat as he stood at the rail, watching the pitching horizon.

“I took a life to save a life,” he told the goddess. “The life I took was worthless, and the life I saved belongs to one of the best men I know. But how will you judge me? What have you in store for me -- was it a test? Did I pass? Will you show me the gates that lead to the colonies where the Zehfti put down new roots, and people like me might still live and breathe?”

He watched the sky, waiting for a sign, but there was none. No one approached him as the afternoon wore through, but many eyes followed him, and he heard Senmet’s people whispering. Every man aboard knew exactly what he was, and Faunos began to fret in earnest. Many decades ago, a rich bounty had been placed on the heads of witchboys. Any man on this ship could be rich in his own right, if he handed the Zehefti fugitive to a witchfinder in Thebes.

Careful as ever, he secured the books and the Eye of Helios, laced the bags with fresh rawhide, and pushed them back under the bed in the tiny cabin. He left the sword unpacked, lying alongside the goatskins, where he could put his hand on it fast, if he were disturbed in the night.

But as afternoon dwindled into evening a Keltoi youth crept closer with a cup of berry juice; a young man from Incaria brought him a succulent mango; one of the Iliosian eunuchs gave him a bronze charm for good luck -- a dolphin the size of his small finger, on a leather thong. Faunos accepted the gifts, and when Afris returned to duty on the evening watch, he ate with the man.

Sunset had begun to flood the sky with blood and gold, which was the joy of mariners. Afris and the steersman were frying fish over a brazier in the lee of the deckhouse, and the smell of food made Faunos’s mouth water.

Before he could ask, Afris offered him a plate. “Senmet --?” Faunos asked.

“Is sore and sweated and in foul tempers,” Afris said unconcernedly, “which means he’ll be drunk tonight, cursing in the morning, and returned to his old, sweet self thereafter. And you, boy. What troubles you? I see you chafing at some puzzle.”

Faunos was eating as he gestured at the crew. “They know what I am now. Vayal pays highly for my kind. Who among them will turn me in for the bounty?”

The lion-maned head shook slowly. “We’re seafarers. Most of us are alive and at liberty tonight because of you, and we all believe that if you throw your good fortune back in the face of Mayat, you fetch down doom upon all. Look at them. They’re Incari, Keltoi, Iliosian, Neftish, Aegyyptian, a few from Nubiye, like myself -- which means we’re as superstitious as any man in Vayal, we just believe in different ghosts!” Afris lifted a brow at Faunos. “You’ll be welcome to stay aboard, if you like. We sometimes sail out as far as Jaymaca in the west and the Keltoi shores in the east, and the worst part of it is Hurucan. And the pirates,” he added with a white-toothed grin, almost as an afterthought. “With you aboard, bastard scum like Eudoros will soon learn to let us pass by.”

“I -- I could.” Faunos was astonished. “I hadn’t thought of it.”

Afris leaned on the long steering oar as he ate. “It would be difficult for the witchfinders to know you exist, if you’re never in any port longer than a tide or three.” He spat out a bone and looked Faunos up and down. “There’s Keltoi lads aboard who know a thing or two about the Power. They’ll fight for the privilege of your company, if you want to pick a lover.”

Now Faunos shivered. He had not thought of this, either. “The Power doesn’t concern you,” he observed.

“Not me.” Afris made the sign of the Jaguar before his face. “I’ve seen dark magic, where the jungle is so thick, you can’t look down and see your own feet! Zehefti magic is bright and clear as mountain water. I respect it. I know the names of Diomedas and Hellas and Iridan. They’re written into legend, even where I come from.”

A vast sense of relief coursed through Faunos. He sagged back against the deckhouse and mocked himself with a shaky chuckle. “I’ve never met people like you and Senmet. My teacher -- may the gods bless his soul -- kept me apart from people. Wisely, I always thought. Was he wrong?”

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Senmet’s voice was sharp with healthy fear. “For the love of Helios, the cargo is just what you see. It’s been hard to get a decent load since the storm, and Zeheft, and --”

“And I say, you are the pig-face liar,” Eudoros growled. “And I think I just flick my wrist now, and your head rolls in the basket there with the broken pots, and then I take this stinking, piss-pot bucket you call the ship apart, and have what I want, and who I want.”

“Eudoros, we have only what you see,” Senmet panted. “Killing me won’t put silver and pearls in those barrels.”

“Maybe not,” Eudoros agreed grudgingly, “but maybe your head in the basket is worth a barrel of silver, you think?”

He would do it. Faunos felt it -- the man was beyond reason, as if he and Senmet had fought some kind of running feud for much too long, and it must end here, now, somehow. All he had to do was turn the blade of that axe and put a few pounds of pressure on it, and Senmet’s throat would be laid wide open. Afris, Leonidas and several of the crew were up above, poised on the lip of the hold, but they were under the archers and if they moved they would be quilled like porcupines.

The last thing Faunos wanted was to get involved, but the choice was not his. An icy sweat beaded his face and shoulders as he twisted in the cramped space and, with the tip of the sword, cut the lacings on the bag holding the books. Buried among them, concealed in its silk and leather and the wooden chest, was the Eye of Helios.

And he was about to go against everything Galen had ever said to him.

His hand thrust deep into the bag, he pulled the box onto his knee and threw it open. The old silk tore as he lifted out the bracelet, but the stone was already throbbing with life before he set it into the gold clasps on the back of his left wrist. And then he stood up and let Eudoros see him.

The axe blade had already begun to turn. Senmet’s face was clenched like a fist, his eyes were wide with dread, when Eudoros spun away toward Faunos. Released, Senmet could do no more than clutch his bruised gullet with both hands, trying to breathe, and to staunch the blood, where delicate skin was cut -- but his windpipe and the great veins within were safe. Faunos glanced once at him, knew this, and turned his full attention on the brigand.

His hands were still down, concealed by the barrels; Eudoros could see neither the sword nor the blue-white, pulsing jewel. The man’s eyes, nested in deep creases and almost invisible, narrowed on Faunos. The axe thrust toward him, a gesture of naked threat.

“What you are doing there?” The voice was deep, rumbling. “They got you in the hold?” He looked Faunos up and down, and glanced at his lieutenants, above. “I think we got the jewel of this load. The rest is trash. Get down here and truss him, then have what you want, take what you like, wherever you find it.”

Faunos’s voice was very light, very clear. “No.” He spoke simply, and did not move so much as a muscle. “You’ll not be taking me, or anything, anyone, else. Leave now and you’re free to go, but mark this ship well and avoid her in future. There’ll be no second chances.”

The big, square face screwed itself into a grimace. “Do they keep you in the hold because you’re mad as the blind wolf howling at the moon? Senmet, you mongrel out of an Incari whore, what is this pretty little creature? Where you find them like this, beautiful like starlight and too crazy to know brothel from temple? I’ll take ten, if you got them.”

“Just a passenger,” Senmet rasped. “Afris, throw me down a rag. I’m bleeding like a pig.”

“You are the pig,” Eudoros sneered, and gestured at his men. “I told you already, shit-for-brains, truss the crazy boy. Take what you want from the rest, but be fast. I’m done here.”

“No,” Faunos said in the same tone. “You won’t lay hands on me, and you’ll let Senmet wrap the wound. You heard me the first time, Captain. I won’t say it a second time. Leave while you can.”

“Little bitch,” Eudoros growled. “Crazy or not, mad or not, you don’t speak such words to me. You get the lesson, now. You learn who owns you. First, I finish what I started, put your friend’s head in the basket. Then, I put you over this barrel and give you the reason to howl. You learn why they call Eudoros the Bull.” The axe was already moving as he finished speaking, and none of it was bluster, nor lies. Eudoros meant every word.

Fear and shock had always ignited the Power in Faunos. It throbbed through him, from the pit of his belly into every extremity, and in the comparative dimness of the hold he knew the odd, blue-white light would be shimmering about his limbs as he lifted his left hand.

It seemed to him that the axe snatched itself out of Eudoros’s fist, twisted in the air and sank itself in the brigand’s belly. Faunos saw it there, felt it with his own hands, as if he had swung the blow that threw Eudoros to his knees, eyes bugging out in shock and disbelief.

He took a deep, steadying breath and looked up, past the stunned, wide eyed Senmet, at the faces clustered along the rim of the hold, and beyond, at the archers in the rigging of Eudoros’s galley. Both crews were frozen in sheer disbelief. Senmet’s people were wasting their advantage, and Faunos might have cursed them.

As one, the archers flung themselves into the water, as if the breath of Hurucan had picked them up and tossed them away like toys. The Power rushed through Faunos, a divine wind, a storm in his nerves, a song without sound or words coursing through the fibers of his body. He reached for it -- caught it and mastered it for a sublime moment, before it seethed out of his control, as it always did.

Too soon, he felt the scorch of the uncontrolled Power and slipped off the bracelet an instant before it began to burn. He skin was ruddy, as if he had been too long in the sun, but the shimmer of light around his limbs subsided, leaving him trembling. The Eye of Helios lay brooding and crackling on top of the bags -- but no one knew he had taken it off, or that yet again he had lost control of it. Or let it take control of him.

In the same moment, panic erupted across both ships with wild screams of Zehefti magic. Faunos sagged back against the bulkhead, rubbing his wrist and trying not to think about what he had done to the brigand. What mattered was that Senmet was alive, still holding his gullet and blinking foolishly at the crumpled body of Eudoros.
Up on deck, the Incari’s crew had at last seized the opportunity. It was a grudge match, Faunos was sure. The blood being shed across both vessels was far in excess of what was warranted by today’s display of cruelty and stupidity. Death was heavy on the air, sultry as an incoming storm. Faunos felt it like a great weight on his shoulders, and he pressed both hands to his face, clapped them over his ears, to shut out the sound of men dying.

Black and scarlet darkness overwhelmed him and he might have been drowning in it. He threshed, knew he was going down into the bottom of a deep, deep pool, as if he had forgotten how to swim, or did not care to try.

And then a hand touched his shoulder lightly and he jerked awake, shocked to see daylight and hear nothing save the wind, the sea. He was lying on the barrels under the open hatch, and both Senmet and Afris were peering into his face. He could see at a glance, they knew exactly what they had witnessed, and he was simply lucky that neither man was from Vayal. Senmet was from the far side of Incari, where the mountains were so steep, the people were said to be descended from sea goats. Afris was from Nubiye, where magic was coveted, not dreaded.

Thought and sense fell back into place like the pieces of a puzzle, and Faunos sat up. His eyes went straight to the bags where he had left the Eye of Helios, and his heart skipped a beat with sheer relief as he saw it still there. No one had moved it, much less taken in. Had they tried -- had someone been hurt, even killed? And then he looked into Senmet’s face, and Afris’s, and waited for the obvious question.

“We know you’re Zehefti,” Senmet said, hoarse, rasping. His gullet was bound with clean linen and the wound seemed to have stopped bleeding. “Are you also a witchboy? You can tell me the truth. This is an Incari crew, with a few like Afris, from Aegyptos and Kriti, and even a lad or two from Jaymaca. No one here will try to do you harm, so long as you don’t turn your magicks on us.”

Even if Faunos could have lied, he would not have. “I won’t do you harm,” he swore. “Why do you think I’m aboard? I’m trying to run! The witchfinder was right behind me. I can’t go to Vayal, and you’ve seen the smoke from Zeheft. I have to get out, there’s no place for me on these shores.”

“And here you are,” Senmet mused. He arched a brow at Afris. “I’ve heard of the witchboys. Never seen one with my own eyes. I thought you were a myth … you don’t look evil. I’ve been told you’re all monstrosities.”

Desperate, Faunos clambered to his feet and threw down his wrap. He stood naked before Senmet, challenging him to find any physical deformity. “I’m no more a demon than my brothers were demons, or my father.”

“Mariners from Vayal also warned me when I was very young,” Afris added in the thick, exotic accent of Nubiye, “never make love with a Zehefti boy, for your soul might be sucked out.” He grinned, showing large white teeth. “My people tell the same stories of the djinn and the genii.”

“And mine,” Senmet said hoarsely, “are not so superstitious.” He gave Faunos a thoughtful frown. “If you were as malicious as Vayal believes, you’d have seized power, taken Eudoros’s side and killed us all.” He fingered his throat. “I thank you for my life.”

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